http://eolan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] eolan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wizened_cynic 2008-09-18 03:41 am (UTC)

The story was awesome! It felt like a first chapter, and that there should be more. I sensed somehow a subplot of Alex being sexually abused by her father.
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